Bad Reputation

Bad Reputation

3.8K Reads 83 Votes 5 Part Story
ImJustOneGirl By ImJustOneGirl Updated Aug 10, 2011

Ia has had everything taken away from her, leaving her with nothing left to live for. Her mother is gone, her father has become a ghost, all her former friends have abandonned her and even her teachers now act wary arround her. The only thing she has left to cling on to is the sky, her sky, wondering and fantasising about what is up there is the only way out of her inner turmoil...

Astin is a rebel. He has gone to 6 different schools, St. Gabriel Catholic school being the newest one. He has made it his goal to get expelled from this school aswell, as his mother has forbidden him from leaving school. But does a strange girl he meets at a bike shed change this?

aSecretStory aSecretStory Aug 09, 2011
Great start like the other person said!! It is really good so that's why I just had to voted!!
ImJustOneGirl ImJustOneGirl Aug 09, 2011
yeah on wattpad capital 'i' is 'I' its kinda stupid :/ yeah you pronounce it as 'Ay-Ah' i mentioned it in the story, whebn the teacher mispronounce it :) thanxxx@Surf1996Girl
dialupthesun dialupthesun Aug 09, 2011
Brilliant start! It really grabs the reader's attention!
                              Just one question, what is her name?? la? And how do you pronounce it? And shouldn't it have a capital letter?
                              Great job so far though!!
realityxfantasy realityxfantasy Aug 09, 2011
This is unique, original, and extremely likable. I thought you did a pretty good job with details, although your paragraphs are kinda chunky. But overall, nice job, great effort, and fantastic job!
Gwen03 Gwen03 Aug 09, 2011
This is really unique, and your writing is good! I think you might want to space out your paragraphs though. But other than that, great job! :)
- - Aug 09, 2011
I really like this. It was well written and very entertaining. Warning though, ALL CAPS HURTS THE EYES! Other than that it was great!