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Sam By Samsandhu1987 Updated Aug 08, 2012

Sam was celebrating his 25 birthday with his friends when some object flying from the sky hit the ground near them and they got strangely teleported thousands of years ahead from 2012-9994 where the life still was at full swing after The Sun lost it's existence .
Sam a few years back was bitten by a warewolf while tracking in the woods of Eastern India near the pacific ocean and to save his life he jumped into the sea but his wound attracted some strange species of fish which sucked his blood and later he was found  almost dead near the sea shore by Aman now his best friend who is a vampire and he turned Sam as well to save his life.A few days later Sam found himself turned into a strange creature as he was bitten by three strange creatures simultaneously he got powers of all three of them and most surprising thing was when he came to know the fish gave him power to turn invisible at his wish anytime .
So guys let's enter the world of Sam and his companions who knows when they come in front of your door and you say No This Can't be True

Samsandhu1987 Samsandhu1987 Aug 10, 2012
Yeah surely u are right and I will try my best to put in maximum details and feelings
AliceNACT AliceNACT Aug 10, 2012
@Samsandhu1987 I'm not really talking character's POV, you don't always have to be in that character's POV to convey their thoughts and feelings. And yeah, I'll read on.
Samsandhu1987 Samsandhu1987 Aug 10, 2012
@AliceNACT hi I really appreciate the way you gave the hardcore feedback and now think I should edit the prologue but may be I think I'll need a few changes in the later chapters as well but I'll appreciate if you could tell mr what's exactly you would like to see in the prologue
Samsandhu1987 Samsandhu1987 Aug 09, 2012
@cudaphelps Hi thanks for your feedback and I'll try to make lesser mistakes in the future and I hope you'll enjoy the book ahead
Samsandhu1987 Samsandhu1987 Aug 09, 2012
@lless18 thank you very much for the feedback as it really matters a lot
lless18 lless18 Aug 09, 2012
Great start.Defiantly captured my attention,keep going cause the story line is so unique and interesting :) And I think from what I have read,you are going to go very far with your writing.