Just Tragic

Just Tragic

3.1K Reads 179 Votes 7 Part Story
xxxMM31xx By xxxMM31xx Updated Apr 15, 2011

Claire is a normal average teenage girl. At the start something really tragic happens! Time flies by and she forgets the tragic event and lives life normally. To top it all of Claire is in love with a boy called Dylan, will her love be successful or will she keep getting tragic events that change her life to the most. Read the book to find out!

AVoiceofSilence AVoiceofSilence Apr 17, 2011
Interesting indeed. For me this all happened too fast but when things happen like this it does seem as if time is going more quickly. I'm enjoying :) 
SpeedReader8117 SpeedReader8117 Apr 14, 2011
@maybeitsfaitbmc Yeah, I got the pic from a forwarded email from my mom. Had a bunch of cute animal pics so I saved my favorites. :)
                              I <3 Bunnies XD
PyroResistance PyroResistance Apr 13, 2011
You need to work on your grammar; tense, punctuation and more but the story does seem promising so far :) 
                              Keep going! Also think about how you might say things in real life, for example, "I am going out" or "I'm going out" :) 
                              Hope this helped x
SpeedReader8117 SpeedReader8117 Apr 12, 2011
OoO C-c... Crash?!?! Well, now I have to read more. lol
                              Good first chapter. :)
ChristieNortje ChristieNortje Apr 12, 2011
I think it's brilliant don't give into the criticism I went through it too, just go on writing, write for the love of writing.
CorrinaBaxter CorrinaBaxter Mar 31, 2011
I like the plot of this it seems very interesting, like the other comments the grammer is a little off but I know i'm not the best with that either so no worries, other then that it's really good :)