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The Unmasking

The Unmasking

3.4K Reads 68 Votes 10 Part Story
Lumpy Space Princess By tangerine16 Updated Sep 03, 2011

Casey remembers everything from that eventful night... the ball, the masked people, the guy, and of course, the sweet and innocent kiss. But 3 years later, their family, very far from what they used to be, moved. From then on, she has experienced things she never did before. And as she sets out to see what the real world for a teen is all about, she unexpectedly stumbles upon her past. Now, she tries to unmask the very wonder of her dearly enchantment that night at the ball. She embarks on an intruiging task to unmask who the guy she spent her first magical kiss with because it was more than just a kiss.

tangerine16 tangerine16 Mar 31, 2012
@cudaphelps i'll try to do that :) thank you so much for commenting :)
emgrecula emgrecula Mar 30, 2012
@tangerine16 Yeah, if you added more description and thoughts of the main character then I think it would be great :D
tangerine16 tangerine16 Mar 29, 2012
@cudaphelps thank you!!!! :))) I'm actually planning to edit/rewrite this cause I've written this almost 2 years ago and I think it really lacks something..  I just can't find the time to do it. Anyway, I'm so glad you like it. Thank you so much for reading it :)
emgrecula emgrecula Mar 18, 2012
I loved this! and I;m adding it to my library :D I wish you wouldst described everything more though, it's a bit short and I didn't really feel THERE, you know? Anyways, I think It's amazing and love where it's going :D VOTED! great job!
tangerine16 tangerine16 Jan 08, 2012
@Alohalinchi thanks :) oh, he will be making appearances in the next chapters so maybe you can find descriptions of his features there :D anyway, THANKS a lot for reading this. Hope you continue to read the next chapters :)
tangerine16 tangerine16 Nov 15, 2011
@dayzimay thank you.. You don't know how much your comment means to me. :) btw, how did you find my story?