An Ever Fixed Mark

An Ever Fixed Mark

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Sabrina Brandon By SabrinaBrandon Completed

Elizabeth Bennet has refused an offer of marriage from the handsome and rich Fitzwilliam Darcy.  She has told him in a hateful manner everything she holds against him.  Mr. Darcy defends himself by writing her a letter.  In this altered tale of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice Mr. Darcy encounters Elizabeth in Rosings Park soon after she has read his letter.

Ah! I'm sad to see it ended. I selfishly wanted it to continue in this AU route. One if the things I wished Austen had done, was to give us more about their courtship.
This is so beautifully done. I could even see it as having come from Jane Austen's own hand as an AU of her story. I love it.
BriezVIP BriezVIP Jan 24, 2016 08:52AM
Your story is amazing and well written. It brought pictures to my brain, and tears to my eyes. (Sorry I'm a sucker for romance)
SabrinaBrandon SabrinaBrandon Dec 23, 2015 07:18PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and I'm glad you found some pleasure in.
lizzyc13 lizzyc13 Jul 16, 2014 02:19AM
I enjoyed it very much! Your focus was excellent! My only remark is that some description of the characters in appearance would make it seem slightly more realistic. But it is totally awesome!! Well done!!!
Moonster512 Moonster512 May 19, 2014 10:41PM
That was beautiful. Worthy of Austen's writing itself! Thank you for that refreshing spin on the encounter between Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam.