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Scott Kelly By ScottKelly Completed

Six teens are devoted to a game with one rule: If a player gets tagged, they must change their life within the next fifteen minutes. The better the player, the bigger the change. One might give their car away, or punch the school bully. Another might change identities or sacrifice their virginity. Anything to keep evolving, to avoid fitting into a label or caring about the junk they own. But their quest for enlightenment has taken a rotten final turn - one of the players has murdered the game's creator, the teen prophet (cult leader?) David Bloom. 
    
    Our narrator is being framed for the crime; can he clear his name and discover which of his lifelong friends is the murderer before he takes the fall?
    
    [sic] is a gritty teen murder mystery that delves into the psychology of enlightenment among the criminally dysfunctional.

This book's first chapter itself caught be this bad. .... I really can't imagine how good the rest of the book will be.
Wandering_Bard Wandering_Bard Mar 07, 2016 01:27AM
Awesome beginning. This sounds like a very intriguing dystopian world but with more of an internal conflict than external.
MutatedChicken MutatedChicken Nov 16, 2015 02:33PM
Is no one bothered that he is complementing a pile meat and bones? Plus, the occasional skin strips.
jpwritr jpwritr Nov 06, 2015 08:11AM
Pretty cool read so far keep up the good work your friend JP
mordacity mordacity Oct 29, 2015 01:50PM
I don't know how many times I've read this (far too many times) but each time it still makes me feel like I'm reading it for the first time. Not something many books can do.
Weirdo-Alert Weirdo-Alert Oct 28, 2015 12:46AM
My friends and I do this accept we take turns doing dumb ridiculous things in school.