Player on board

Player on board

35 Part Story 71K Reads 1.1K Votes
Azhur0 By Azhur0 Completed

Love is hard to find in regular circumstances, let alone when you're in year twelve and ten weeks pregnant. From first sight, Oliver, a player of all things, knew he loved the pregnant senior. Can he handle the drama surrounding the pregnant woman, Mayarna, and keep his player ways discarded? Can May let herself open up to the hot player who might break her heart? What about the crazy, possessive ex that put her in this condition?

Hevz5847 Hevz5847 May 07, 2014 03:15PM
lol no not my sons, his Titi.(tia)  (auntie) But yea..... ok so I was saying it right to whole time I was reading. I feel much better now lol.
Hevz5847 Hevz5847 May 07, 2014 07:22AM
....names....awkward. but from description in next chapter I could totally see her as Ashley Benson for character pic
FabulousDoll FabulousDoll Mar 15, 2013 06:43PM
I did notice that your have improved, I skipped a couple of chapters and there was quite a bit of improvement there :D
Azhur0 Azhur0 Mar 14, 2013 10:13PM
@FiFiLaFemme Also, If I did go back and edit it, I would change it because I know what you mean but I don't really want to because I cringe every time I read my own works :P I like to think I get better with time and experience...lol.
Azhur0 Azhur0 Mar 14, 2013 09:57PM
@FiFiLaFemme I agree! He never really was much of a player..... LOL! I'm terrible at making guys players or jerks, haha.
FabulousDoll FabulousDoll Mar 14, 2013 02:40PM
I still think this should be edited because too me, you need to make Oliver more of a player and so far he seems normal.