Jason Binx And The Curse Of The Massacre Manor

Jason Binx And The Curse Of The Massacre Manor

52.5K Reads 814 Votes 20 Part Story
Kayla By kaybabe300 Completed

Jason Binx and His friend Greg Walsh plan to make a documentary of the 'haunted' Massacre Manor, but when things take a turn for the worst will Binx be able to fix everything and still come out alive?

mealle mealle Oct 31, 2011
I've read this story before, it is actually in my library but just so you know I checked it out, I voted for it. It is still great, well done!
Sierra256715 Sierra256715 Oct 28, 2011
Nicely done - not quite my thing but it seems to please many others! Just work on atmosphere, use more linguistics. ;)
purplecursor purplecursor Oct 24, 2011
I shall read this later when it's not dark anymore:)) It's already 1am here. I do love the rush of reading these kind of things but they're not fun anymore if I keep looking over my shoulder to see if there's a ghost or killer.
purplecursor purplecursor Oct 24, 2011
there's an I you should capitalize it's after hey.
                              
                              God I love thrillers. And this seems like a really good one.
                              
                              GREAT CLIFFHANGER
tinakilgore tinakilgore Oct 07, 2011
there were some mistakes but who's book doesn't, you did a magnificent job with you writing and kelp me mesmerize!
dustclears dustclears Sep 26, 2011
Ohh scary. Your writing is really good, and I can tell you have alot of talent.