Jason Binx and His friend Greg Walsh plan to make a documentary of the 'haunted' Massacre Manor, but when things take a turn for the worst will Binx be able to fix everything and still come out alive?
I've read this story before, it is actually in my library but just so you know I checked it out, I voted for it. It is still great, well done!
Nicely done - not quite my thing but it seems to please many others! Just work on atmosphere, use more linguistics. ;)
I shall read this later when it's not dark anymore:)) It's already 1am here. I do love the rush of reading these kind of things but they're not fun anymore if I keep looking over my shoulder to see if there's a ghost or killer.
there's an I you should capitalize it's after hey.
God I love thrillers. And this seems like a really good one.
there were some mistakes but who's book doesn't, you did a magnificent job with you writing and kelp me mesmerize!
Ohh scary. Your writing is really good, and I can tell you have alot of talent.