Life just isn't fair.

Life just isn't fair.

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Dont_give_up By Dont_give_up Updated Mar 16, 2011

Raven hides from her boyfriend David that she is cheating on him. Her bff though cant keep the secret as she knows it will hurt her friend David in the long run. Soon enough David finds out and slowly starts to fall in love with the girl whole told on Raven. Mally finds herself in the worst position, risking her trust of her family and her respect of her bff she can't help but be in love with David. As Raven and Davids ex liisa try to ruin what they have, and take away any contact David and Mally find away around it, but how long will it take before the road ends? will their love be enough to go threw the crap that everyone seems to be giving? or will family get in the way? welcome to my life.

Dont_give_up Dont_give_up Mar 16, 2011
@jordanisamazingg no problem, anything to help, and thank you :) 
jordanisamazingg jordanisamazingg Mar 16, 2011
That was good I liked it (: and thanks for commenting back on mine .. I'm gonna delete and see if I can make it better (: Yours was good but I feel like I should of known more about her .. Like her parents or what she looks like or where she was or what? Lol thanks for the feedback!