Barrier within

Barrier within

137 Reads 7 Votes 1 Part Story
Cassidee By Cassideejustine Updated Mar 16, 2011

Evelynn was just a normal girl growing up and taking care of her little brother, Bry since her dad is constantly working. One day her brother goes missing and while searching for him gets kidnapped by a green eyed mystery man. When she arrives in an unknown place she meets Rogan, a man who she thought was a family friend but is actually not only her kidnapper but also her brothers. While Rogan starts testing on Evelynn and Bry secrets begin to unfold as she finds out new unbelievable thing not only about herself but also her family.

cdebusk05 cdebusk05 Mar 17, 2011
I like it.  It is well written and very easy and enjoyable to ready.  Please keep going with it.