The Fall

The Fall

1.5K Reads 32 Votes 3 Part Story
Monica By EmmeandEmme Completed

Rian Winsom's parents take in foster children, run-aways, and kids the system has simply failed.  It can be hard to see that you, yourself are in trouble when everyone around you is doing so much worse.  When doing what is best for yourself means doing nothing for those you care about, it's easy for things to go wrong.

Rian wants to help those she loves but she doesn't know how and the more she tries the further she's pulled into a world of drugs and danger.  When things seem hopeless, Rian meets Jess, a beautiful stranger who seems bent on keeping her away from the danger that has a hold on her friend.  Can this mysterious stranger help Rian find her way out of danger or is he just pulling her in deeper?

EmmeandEmme EmmeandEmme Sep 29, 2011
@xMadamexMillerx Thank you so much!  What an awesome compliment!  Made my day and I needed it.  The bus broke down on the way to work today! :=/ And You're so sweet to go back and vote on every chapter!  :D The edited version will have the end clarified.
xMadamexMillerx xMadamexMillerx Sep 28, 2011
Oh snap, my phone cut me off. Anywho... As I was about to say, I'm about to go vote for every chapter. Absolutely loved this story (as I said before), it is definitely going in my library, it has already claimed a place in my mental list of favourites. :)
xMadamexMillerx xMadamexMillerx Sep 28, 2011
I loved this story. I literally couldn't put it down. Very well written, although I agree with the other commenters that the ending was somewhat vague
drcharity drcharity Sep 06, 2011
Okay, i love this story, but i did not understand anything about the end except that they were somehow together. 
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EmmeandEmme EmmeandEmme Aug 31, 2011
@chai3000 Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)  Thank you for reading it and voting!
EmmeandEmme EmmeandEmme Aug 08, 2011
@lalaloverr Thanks!  I'm so glad you liked it!. I might be posting another story I'm working on soon.  Hope you'll check it out when I do. :)