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A Brush With Death

A Brush With Death

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Harry Sharpe By hsharpe1997 Completed

My first story that I ever wrote.  Inspector Jenkins is called in to investigate suspicious goings on at a toothpaste factory.  But, soon he has a lot more on his hands...

hsharpe1997 hsharpe1997 Feb 14, 2012
@Sorrow72 Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to hear back from people.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Mar 16, 2011
@hsharpe1997 - I liked the pun =] It was still awful though...
hsharpe1997 hsharpe1997 Mar 16, 2011
@TheOrangutan Thanks a lot.  I recently rediscovered my older stories and thought they were pretty good.  And sorry for the awful pun, but everybody loves a bit of cheese in a story.  Glad you enjoyed it.
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Mar 15, 2011
Hi Harry, 
                              Thanks for the dedication old son, very much appreciated. Enjoyed the story, nicely tongue in cheek, well written and an awful pun at the end. Nice to see you posting something up. Nicely done old son, Gav