A trip to scotland seemed nice enough to Esther Smith, that was until she fell into a cave and she found her fate...(I'm not sure about the tittle, yet)
Um, it's a nice plot. You should check when you put periods and spaces, though. Because it's hard to read like that.
I think you should also do some paragraphs, instead of having everything cooped up together.Apart from that, I enjoyed reading it.