When a man named Daniel and his friend Dustin go on a cruise to enjoy some R&R they didn't know that they, and about half the others on board, would be fighting a great evil in a new world they would have to call home.
MINECWAFT!!! I love it! I've never thought of making a camp though... O.o
I play minecraft its awesome!!!!!!!
i have a server
name AlexJasonServer (lame right)
its a hunger games server
also sometimes pvp or survival
This is a little wierd, they just got off the ship, BUT they magically know what to do. Most noobs don't even know how to mine, your DEFINETLY not a noob though. Your a good author too
Love minecraft, I play with my friends everyday! Also good job on this story!
@Poison4Hearts For the dialogue how does it not sound normal and how should i change it. This is my first piece of writing and I am new to dialogue. any help would be appreciated.
@Poloe96 Yes thank you for commenting on his work. He jumped when he saw one so thanks.