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Fight for it

Fight for it

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ThatGingerFreak By ThatGingerFreak Updated Sep 13, 2016

Caroline is a girl with issues at home. A dad who beats her and brings prostitutes home, no mother to be found, and she gets picked on at school. On her 15th birthday, she runs away after her father breaks yet another promise. She's found by Mario. A boxing coach, and foster parent to 5 boys. That's right. Only boys. what trouble will come her way as she starts to show the boxing world that guys don't always beat the girls?

I think it's supposed to say back handspring seeing as the fact that you are kind of doing it out of a round off...unless the three skills are being done separately
DevinHartley DevinHartley Jul 19, 2016
Ummm... Doesn't she say she's 16 in the first chapter? Or did someone else say that?
Zero years for me however my friend ditched me in the art club for cheer however it's okay it alright @Kiki_Mulaa
Devil_in_disguise Devil_in_disguise Mar 02, 2016
You have a really good plot but to be completely honest to get better you should slow down a little. You may also want to give a deeper meaning and more details. A little bit of a longer intro but otherwise it's a really really good story
Wings-of-Insanity Wings-of-Insanity Apr 10, 2016
I have no clue how that looks like so I'm just gonna imagine her running up to a wall & then doing some flips/splits. I don't do any of that stuff so yeah...
swim_faster swim_faster Apr 26, 2016
Three ways of doing the splits? I know that there's like out on the sids and out front, whats the third ? ( my gymnastique/cheer knowledge is not so advanced ) ( a 2year old knows more than me ) btw love the story