"Freezing Path"

"Freezing Path"

1 Part Story 215 Reads 12 Votes
Tad Merrill By TadMerrill Completed

A poem about not wanting to deal with loneliness, but trudging through it's cold bite anyways.

saltw96 saltw96 Jan 02, 2013 11:31AM
simply beautiful i felt like i can relate i mean i heard poems about loneliness but this one really got me its so unique and well written you truly are one of my favorite poets<3
TadMerrill TadMerrill Oct 05, 2012 01:49AM
@sarakat99 lol thank you for your thoughts. You seem to be a minority, though! Thanks for reading!!! :D
Great poem, I bet it would sound awesome read aloud, You're really good!
night_blood night_blood Oct 02, 2012 05:01PM
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SashaWindrider SashaWindrider Sep 20, 2012 10:46PM
It's tiring. The rhymes are too try hard, it detracts from the poem. Try not to rhyme so much.
SashaWindrider SashaWindrider Sep 20, 2012 10:26PM
This is a good poem. However all the rhyming does get tedious. Otherwise it's a pretty good poem.