"Freezing Path"

"Freezing Path"

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Tad Merrill By TadMerrill Completed

A poem about not wanting to deal with loneliness, but trudging through it's cold bite anyways.

saltw96 saltw96 Jan 02, 2013
simply beautiful i felt like i can relate i mean i heard poems about loneliness but this one really got me its so unique and well written you truly are one of my favorite poets<3
TadMerrill TadMerrill Oct 05, 2012
@sarakat99 lol thank you for your thoughts. You seem to be a minority, though! Thanks for reading!!! :D
TheMysticsApprentice TheMysticsApprentice Oct 04, 2012
Great poem, I bet it would sound awesome read aloud, You're really good!
night_blood night_blood Oct 02, 2012
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SashaWindrider SashaWindrider Sep 20, 2012
It's tiring. The rhymes are too try hard, it detracts from the poem. Try not to rhyme so much.
SashaWindrider SashaWindrider Sep 20, 2012
This is a good poem. However all the rhyming does get tedious. Otherwise it's a pretty good poem.