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"Freezing Path"

"Freezing Path"

216 Reads 12 Votes 1 Part Story
Tad Merrill By TadMerrill Completed

A poem about not wanting to deal with loneliness, but trudging through it's cold bite anyways.

saltw96 saltw96 Jan 02, 2013
simply beautiful i felt like i can relate i mean i heard poems about loneliness but this one really got me its so unique and well written you truly are one of my favorite poets<3
TadMerrill TadMerrill Oct 05, 2012
@sarakat99 lol thank you for your thoughts. You seem to be a minority, though! Thanks for reading!!! :D
TheMysticsApprentice TheMysticsApprentice Oct 04, 2012
Great poem, I bet it would sound awesome read aloud, You're really good!
night_blood night_blood Oct 02, 2012
Thank you for the poem. Why not check out mine on my night_blood profile...
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- - Sep 20, 2012
It's tiring. The rhymes are too try hard, it detracts from the poem. Try not to rhyme so much.
- - Sep 20, 2012
This is a good poem. However all the rhyming does get tedious. Otherwise it's a pretty good poem.