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Beautiful Surrender{ Slowly Under Construction}

Beautiful Surrender{ Slowly Under Construction}

98.2K Reads 2.6K Votes 28 Part Story
lunner101 By lunner101 Updated Mar 10, 2015

The moment our eyes met on that faithful day, I knew she was mine. I knew she belonged to me and me alone. no matter how hard i try, I'll never be able to forget it, the way her beautiful hazel eyes took me In with such lust and love that it completely overwhelmed my entire body. She was in every single way perfect. just simply looking at her was able to do things to my body that no one else ever could; and in that moment, I knew she was going to become the love of my life, my everything, MATE

My heart completely stopped when his eyes roamed my body, as if it were something he could simply devour just by looking at it. his gaze alone was able to inflame my entire body, wrapping me up with its warmth. I couldn't deny this profound passion I now felt for this gorgeous man standing in front of me. I've never felt this passionate about anyone in my life. so why is it, a stranger, is able to bring out such emotions hidden within me?


lunner101 lunner101 Oct 01, 2014
@WestCoastBae ♥thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it♥
ivyswolvespack ivyswolvespack Aug 16, 2014
I understand if it was an hour but not a whole freakin 15 min (relatable moments anyone?)
lunner101 lunner101 Aug 01, 2014
@slothkoala1 thank you so much. I appreciate your support :)
lunner101 lunner101 Jul 29, 2014
@_Silverdoe_ I appreciate your advice and will take them into consideration, I just want to thank you for reading my story, but I must warn you, it's boring at first but it'll get better. just give it a chance.
Ysa_Arcangel Ysa_Arcangel Jul 29, 2014
I love that sister love. Soni sounds so loving and kind. 
                              On the technical side, a start of each sentence calls for a capital letter as well as the "I". Punctuations and commas were missing. You can easily edit those parts. Nice chapter so far!
lunner101 lunner101 Jul 26, 2014
@Mahomie0415360 glad to hear it. thanks for giving my book a chance.