Thula has only loved one man in all her life but is he the one for her. Marc has used the one person that means the world to him. Is it too late for them to work things out?
It needs editing, I will try to make time for it, work gets in the way.
Wow! I can't wait to read this! Jeez, dude, that's a lot! Well, I better get started! :D
@FindingANewWayOut, it is a whole book. I know what you're saying about the paragraph lengths. I did try to shorten them. If there aren't any perhaps copying and pasting the text nullified them.
This was good but you might want to space out the paragraphs and shorten some. Also is this supposed to be one chapter or a book becuase with the about of pages you may want to put in more chapters. It was good though vote