Shine, Glamour Girl! (ON HOLD, SORRY)

Shine, Glamour Girl! (ON HOLD, SORRY)

1.8K Reads 26 Votes 14 Part Story
Cherie By starangel244 Updated Jun 10, 2011

This story is about a totally average girl who gets transferred to a school for the rich. She learns to survive the tyranny and meets new people along the way. When a group of people from Hollywood records come to audition people for new recruits, she too signs up and from then on, meets with all new difficulties, problems and enemies. Of course, she also meets new loves and friends. Does she get to Hollywood? What happens to her then? Is it the end?

  • dance
  • drama
  • girl
  • glamour
  • hollywood
  • job
  • love
  • school
  • shine
  • sibling
  • sing
  • singer
starangel244 starangel244 Mar 28, 2011
@CerebralAssassin Hmmm... Ok, thanks for the feedback! I think i just had an idea for the story:)
CosmosInChaos CosmosInChaos Mar 27, 2011
I like the story, but it feels as though I have read a number of stories much like this. An "average" girl getting pented up into the world of glamor and greenbacks. It's good and all just not exactly "original". But I will vote for quality of voice! =D
tianajade tianajade Mar 17, 2011
A little too fast paced, and some parts need more description. Your grammar needs some work, as well. But overall, it was a nice beginning. It sounds like an interesting storyline, as well! Nice job, and keep writing! (: