Bad Angels

Bad Angels

261 Reads 5 Votes 2 Part Story
Anna Lee By xOthellox Updated Nov 24, 2011

It's London England, end of the 19th century and the world is bursting with technological advances. James Carter was haughty, handsome, proud, talented, and seemingly perfect. Not to mention immortal. He was part of a secret society of vampires that kept other mythical creatures in balance. Everything was fine in his world of law order, violence, and killing. Until one night. That was all it took to send his world into chaos. He was sent to kill a renegade werewolf charged with the murders of young women in the London area. Strictly procedure. He accomplished it easily and without disturbance but this time was different. He finds an extremely beautiful, unique, teenage girl wounded but otherwise unharmed by a serial killer known to shred his victims. And she doesn't seem entirely human.... Follow James through an unfolding plot of love, loss, mystery, clockwork creatures, murder and a parasol or two.

xOthellox xOthellox Jun 18, 2011
@basvoo Oh thank you so much!! Actually I have plenty more written down I just never have the time to type it! And lol hun I'm sure there are quite a few grammatical errors in there because I was forced to type it in a rush! I'll be sure to check over it and upload more soon 'kay? XD
basvoo basvoo Jun 12, 2011
I really like your story it is good so far. I think some of the grammer might be wrong or at least confusing but that might just be me!! anyway i love it and really love the suspence and description!!! fantastic would love to hear more!!! :)
                              
xOthellox xOthellox Mar 30, 2011
I did not!! James is an attention hog, proud, and hilarious. Hehe he's also a pervert. =3