This will fill the huge 19 year time gap in the Harry Potter epilogue!
I really like the story but I'm not a fan of your writing style, like how you have a new paragraph every line or 2 and the way Harry thinks is very different from the original books, but but that I really like how the story is going, one of the good ones on this app!
AWWWW, Harry loves Mrs. Weasley! Don't feel bad for Fred, Harry, it's not your fault. THE FEELS FOR HINNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If you were dead then no one else could survive, because of the prophecy!! Duh!
Mrs.Weasley just lost a son,but in return she recieved a new one
I am reading the series and literaly today I finished the 4th book when the rebirth is! Lol
I think you may need an editor or/ and to wright it again with a bit more detail, other than that, it's pretty good