Life is so short. Live every moment to the fullest. Leave no room for regret. Break the rules. Live life love Life!!
@ShravanPakir : Good works are always appreciated, sooner or later :)
:-) U sure can write a poem n capture ur reader's attention...
happy ending is one big lie...
tomorrow is always a mystery....
shravan,end has not yet come...u'll meet---up there :)
thats the perfect way to describe your poem :)
@ShravanPakir You're welcome! Always take your time. if you cannot think of anything wait go do something then sit back down... and your mind will be rejuvenated to write again!
I have always found it hard to do three rhymes in a stanza! This was written like it had taken no effort at all! however. The flow towards the end seemed like you rushed it a little bit to fast. Perfection takes time! and Impressions that last!