A Highlander's Heart(ON HOLD)

A Highlander's Heart(ON HOLD)

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Aalaa * Ayla* الاء By glimpseofhope95 Updated Aug 23

Serenity is a beautiful lass from a small village in the Lowlands. Living the life of poverty, she works hard everyday to feed herself . She was almost attacked one day by four men who attempted to rape her and steal her virtue,but that was until a Highland warrior comes and saves her life and beheads the four men. Just when she had begun to consider this man her hero, he kidnaps Serenity and takes her with him to his clan. While she believed that she were to be his prisoner, he claims that he only wants her protection.
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Meet the Highland Beast, the strongest, and most savage warrior in all the highlands. He likes to chop up the  heads of his enemies and shag with random lasses every night for pleasure. Because of the death of his wife seven years ago, Angus MacLean swore that he would never love again. But everything changes when he saves a beautiful lass from almost being raped by his enemy's men. After looking into the eyes of this beautiful damsel in distress,he knew that he wanted her. He captures the lass and takes her to his own clan. Could this lass be the start of a new beginning for Angus? Will his cold,savage heart caress Serenity's own?

7rt80rt 7rt80rt Nov 24, 2015
If they were married for two years then was his son born out of wedlock or is it from a mistress?
EclecticReflection EclecticReflection Oct 01, 2014
Your plot sounds great, but it could really use some grammatical fixing, as well as being a little more clear. Some parts are confusing as far as what's happening. With some work this could be a bestseller! I really love the story line. (:
mariamfuraha mariamfuraha Aug 11, 2014
THIS IS GUD. its very interesting just grabs one's attention. sad he lost his wife but am sure he will get a second chance  at love.
RavensOrchid RavensOrchid Aug 02, 2014
an amazing prologue cannot wait to read the rest your writing is awesome really
GrneyedIrishrose GrneyedIrishrose Dec 31, 2013
Two year olds rarely, if ever, talk in complete, well structured sentences.  And, if he's two, they'd have conceived him nearly a year before their marriage.  Sorry, I don't mean to nit pick.  I only thought to make you aware, if you weren't already(: