Ishiki (Consciousness)

Ishiki (Consciousness)

5.2K Reads 189 Votes 10 Part Story
TK Anez By TKAnez Updated Jan 11, 2012

Joey Jyaki will kill, but he doesn't know it yet. How does an ordinary Japanese boy turn into a murderer? Guided by the mysterious spectre from his nightmares, Joey slowly descends into a place where dreams meet reality.

ashnicole96 ashnicole96 Jun 10, 2012
@TKAnez No problem! Glad I could be helpful. :) I ended up reading all the way through, by the way...
TKAnez TKAnez Jun 10, 2012
@ashnicole96 Ahh thank you for the advice! I'm glad in the end you decided to continue on, and I'll work on grabbing the reader's attention sooner. :)
sapphiregorgeus sapphiregorgeus Jun 12, 2011
I love the story... but I dunno I find it stretches funny. No offence but I think the first chapter may need a tad pruning, I love it but I kept loosing interest cuz of the stretch.
                              But I shall read on cuz i love it and the plot is very original
xxPaybacksabitchxx xxPaybacksabitchxx Jun 11, 2011
I liked the description, it was very original in my opinion and I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work! :)
dustclears dustclears Jun 11, 2011
Very very good. You are very good at keeping the story moving, and you had good description. Good luck in the warty awards you have a good chance at winning. Well done :)
tray1970 tray1970 Jun 08, 2011
wonderful descriptions! this really good; enjoyed reading it :)