Joey Jyaki will kill, but he doesn't know it yet. How does an ordinary Japanese boy turn into a murderer? Guided by the mysterious spectre from his nightmares, Joey slowly descends into a place where dreams meet reality.
@TKAnez No problem! Glad I could be helpful. :) I ended up reading all the way through, by the way...
@ashnicole96 Ahh thank you for the advice! I'm glad in the end you decided to continue on, and I'll work on grabbing the reader's attention sooner. :)
I love the story... but I dunno I find it stretches funny. No offence but I think the first chapter may need a tad pruning, I love it but I kept loosing interest cuz of the stretch.
But I shall read on cuz i love it and the plot is very original
I liked the description, it was very original in my opinion and I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work! :)
Very very good. You are very good at keeping the story moving, and you had good description. Good luck in the warty awards you have a good chance at winning. Well done :)
wonderful descriptions! this really good; enjoyed reading it :)