Nocturne [DNF]

Nocturne [DNF]

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heywot By heywot Completed

Cain Edwards is the most popular guy in school. All the guys want to be him. All the girls want him. And maybe even some guys who don't even know it yet. But outside of school nobody knows him. So when a girl who catches his attention turns out to be the same, it's the start of a dangerous game. What would you do if you found out that the hobby of the guy next door is killing people that walk his way?

Behind_The_Mask Behind_The_Mask Jul 18, 2012
I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!! I can't wait to read more so i'm off to the next chapter
0wasp0 0wasp0 Mar 31, 2011
wow really good so far- interesting and mysterious. Cain is a very unique character, very dark and harsh- but thats good, we always need more unique characters that aren't cliche or stereotypical. Keep writing it's really good! =D
BlondFangs BlondFangs Mar 17, 2011
                              Interesting first chapter. Cain seems like a dark character. I sense he will somehow be tied to Naomi. The description of Naomi was quite lovely. 
heywot heywot Mar 17, 2011
@marilynjacksonO @lucky97 thanks a lot! I appreciate the comments! :)
lucky97 lucky97 Mar 17, 2011
Its awesome!!! I love ur writing style! I'm going to keep up with this book<3<3
marilynjacksonO marilynjacksonO Mar 17, 2011
haha lol, this is really good. great description, funny dialogue