Wish Upon A Star

Wish Upon A Star

17.4K Reads 188 Votes 35 Part Story
heywot By heywot Completed

Sara is the new girl in school, the new annoyance that is. She won't leave me alone. I've bashed her with words more times than I can count, especially after she found out about my secret and indirectly blackmailed me into spending time with her. And thanks to her approaching me the unapproachable, the school president is starting to get ideas.
But it's taken Jake and Will years to get through to me and I'm not about to let a few rich brats ruin the last few months before I'm eighteen and free.

puppluv puppluv Jun 11, 2011
I really liked it :) Sara is so peppy it's funny. But I can understand why the MC dislikes her. Too much peppy is annoying. 
                              
                              I don't really see anything for me to point out except that the words flow weird at some parts. Only once or twice though, so no biggy. Continue the good work.
farawaykiss farawaykiss Apr 28, 2011
i really like this. definitely voted. great stuff so far :) 
GenXblogger GenXblogger Apr 13, 2011
I love it! Voted!
                              In a few places the wording is a little confusing but over all it's a good start!
                              What is a gatekeeper challenge?
MissRaRa MissRaRa Apr 02, 2011
This is really good but It is a little hard to get whats going on at times. It is cool  that it is all in present tense for a change. :P
heywot heywot Mar 25, 2011
@SavyJParker @DianaPena  Thank you very much! ^^ I tried my best! :)
xRadioRebelx xRadioRebelx Mar 25, 2011
*VOTED* Really good, especially the whole Japanese comparisons. Reminds me of anime shows or Korean shows! :D LOVE it! It's so unique, especially how well you wrote it. :) Splendid! <3