A 17 yr old and a 5 yr old girl lost everything a normal human usually have. They were on a long journey to find a place to stay. A man volenteered for them to stay at his place. Once they accepted, do you think their life will be back to normal?
I love the start to your book and don't mean any offense in saying this, but Great Britain is an island so you can't walk there from Rome
That's impossible. You have to be in college many more years to get your PhD to become a professor. It would be more realistic if he was late twenties early thirties. Logically he would still be in college now.
Wtfffff! That's totally not stalkerish at all! Or perverted....my mind is messed up smh
Plus this is in the uk we don't call it college we call it uni
How does he know her age and that the little girl is her sister? It could be her cousin her daughter even. And 21 is a little unrealistic, so I'm going to pretend he is at least 24.
It sounds like he's going to keep them both as a pet or something.. my mind is fked up omg