Textbook Love

Textbook Love

487 Reads 5 Votes 4 Part Story
rachel. By ghostpyjamas Updated Mar 20, 2011

Teenage Fiction, Love, Murder.
He hadn't expected so much in detention. He met her there. The girl with the flower-painted nails. He didn't know what to expect at the time. But what comes next is what matters and he certainly did not see that coming.
Mainly based on the Fleet Foxes' 'Textbook Love'. Different chapters are based on different parts of different songs.
Based on the extraordinary people in my life.

ghostpyjamas ghostpyjamas Mar 20, 2011
@Tropicall Thanks for the advice~ 
                              It's actually a novel kinda thing ^^
Tropicall Tropicall Mar 20, 2011
The report-esque tone used to describe the characters somehow fits with the story! You write very well, and it doesn't get boring at all, even though very little actually happens xD
Tropicall Tropicall Mar 20, 2011
Amazing writing and great descriptions! Even though it's pretty long, it doesn't read like it is. Only sometimes the descriptions clutter up, so maybe you could read it out loud to edit out the rough patches? That always helps me :)