Hi my name is Brooklyn but my friends call me Brookie im 14 years old and this is my story
DONT LET HER MEET THEM ALL AT ONCE!!! THE POOR GIRL WILL DIE!!!
*sings loudly* SHE LOOKS SO PERFECT STANDING THERE IN MY AMERICAN APPERIAL UNDERWEAR AND I KNOW NOW THAT IM SO DOWN
no fvcking way. my name's Keely. just without the 'e' after the 'l'. this is the first time I've seen my name in a fan fic!
Oh Lukey, maybe cause your so tall that she can't see your face. How's the weather up there, Lucifer?
How isn't she fangirling I badly know the band and I am fangirling
One suggestion is to put the author's notes in a different font than the text so as not to confuse the readers. I've seen other authors do it and it helps.