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sophie_890 By sophie_890 Completed

Samantha (Sammie) a student and Kelly a teacher, fall madly in love with each other. whilst defying many obstacles, can they stay together?

sweetsexysavage- sweetsexysavage- Dec 08, 2016
^^^ could use less description on minor things like clothes, hair, etc. If it isn't essential to the story, don't waste lines explaining it, instead use lines explaining more important things like people, their emotionals, or the sky is usually an easy description for beginners
donhag donhag Dec 19, 2016
We need more studs! Maybe Sammie more of a stud. So far enjoying!
nachtmusik nachtmusik Oct 18, 2016
I usually judge a book immediately based on the summary and the opening. I gotta say that the usual "I woke up and press me alarm" is cliché and quite repetitive to see in most books, but hey maybe people like cliché.