The Reason We're Together (Watty Awards 2011)

The Reason We're Together (Watty Awards 2011)

4K Reads 74 Votes 9 Part Story
xMixim By xMixim Updated Dec 23, 2011

An alter-equine named Malisha /Milly finds her mate in her school. It’s her hot, new, young teacher, Maliki. It’s against Maliki’s will to be with Malisha, nonetheless, to not have her family accept him. Malisha’s family is actually fine with her being with him;but because he’s her teacher its only for the sake of letting her have her mate. Will Maliki accept Milly? Or will he deny her? Read and find out.

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MadHarte MadHarte Jan 14, 2012
It's really good, and an completely original plot, although losing my cat would be depressing. I found that it is really good and I look forward to reading more:)
SiCoticSymphony SiCoticSymphony Jan 14, 2012
That Would Be Terrible If My Mom Could Talk To Me In My Head And Know What I'm Doing. I Couldn't Handle It lol
                              This Was Actually Really Good :3
4bribri99 4bribri99 Jan 14, 2012
This is pretty good! I do agree with thelionftw a bit though. It does seem a bit rushed, so just go back and edit it a bit and it will be a full score of 10! :D Good job though, and I love how you start right in the action and plant it out full on that her family has cool powers :)
JustKindaCrazy JustKindaCrazy Apr 07, 2011
It's very well written and quite interesting! Off to read more now! Voted :)
Nina_P Nina_P Apr 03, 2011
@missemochick6-2010 your description of Mr Shawn is brilliant. Gawd, I can picture him right here ;)
Sinfael Sinfael Apr 02, 2011
This is a good start, but as others have said it needs something more to keep the reader's interest. You do have talent as a writer, though. Voted.