heyyyy.... (jerrie)

heyyyy.... (jerrie)

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IrishJ16 By IrishJ16 Completed

jade's POV

Here i am walking into school with my two best friends.Jesy and Leigh, just like we do every morning.All down the corridor people stare, you see we are what some people would say popular.But were not the the sterotypical mean popular girls,were actually nice to everyone except mean people or this girl named ashley jones.Ashley has had a crush on me since we were 16.Were seniors now.

I should also say that me and jesy are on the basketball team and leigh is on the cheerleading squad. My dad is the basketball coach and my mom is the cheerleading coach.

"Hey cutie", i hear ashley say to me.

"Hi" , i say

"You look soo good today"

"Look Ashley i'm not interested nor will i ever be, so just back off already", i tell Ashley sternly.

"Yea ashley just stop everybody knows she doesn't like you", jesy says.

"Shut up jesy, and I will have you jade and I will do whatever it takes", she whispers the last part in my ear.Which makes me sick.

"Never talk to Jesy like that and I will...

hypocrite- hypocrite- Jun 02
Is it bad that I've already read this story like 5 times.. 6 now
Guess who's back at it again reading this book😂😂 
                              Right me haha
IrishJ16 IrishJ16 May 31, 2014
@nicole26horan ok thanx i'll try to slow it down and make it longer thanx for the feedback ;)
nicole26horan nicole26horan May 31, 2014
I think its a bit small. Also, everythings happening too fast..Its a really nice idea tho and its an amazing try if we consider thats your very first book!
IrishJ16 IrishJ16 May 31, 2014
@nicole26horan thanx a lot and if i get one more comment i'll do another update today