"Everyone else sucks." he grumbled. "And your not a freak. Your just broken. Your my beautiful Broken Princess."
TRIGGER WARNING: This story involves self harm, and suicide.
Love the way it's described to the perfection and a very interesting way to start a book
Such a deep poem, describes it to the perfection simply beautiful
Stab the guy in the dick with my pencil... just... ouch... >_<
I think you did a nice job here :) It's a bit relatable :) Just try to work on your flow a bit more and adding details and description :) Overall, nice job :)
I love the art and description, your writing isnt complicated and it isnt crappy either.
your way of writing is pretty easy to read i like plus nice description can't wait to read more about the characters