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Broken Princess

Broken Princess

70.7K Reads 2.3K Votes 31 Part Story
Mara By Broken_Ang3l Completed

"Everyone else sucks." he grumbled. "And your not a freak. Your just broken. Your my beautiful Broken Princess."

TRIGGER WARNING: This story involves self harm, and suicide.

BrooklynTV9 BrooklynTV9 Jun 15
I've read it all, can you make a second one called "Broken Prince" where it's how Jon reacted after the story ended (I wont put how in case somebody that hasn't read it sees it) and he like gets depressed etc; tyyyyyyy :)
Eveleynn707 Eveleynn707 Mar 05
I like how the only thing that gets me is the name Jonathan... Ugh I really don't want to ever hear that name again, but I know so many
Brownies4U18 Brownies4U18 Nov 18, 2014
Love the way it's described to the perfection and a very interesting way to start a book
Brownies4U18 Brownies4U18 Nov 18, 2014
Such a deep poem, describes it to the perfection simply beautiful
BeyondTheTower BeyondTheTower Aug 06, 2014
Stab the guy in the dick with my pencil... just... ouch... >_<
_FigureItOut_ _FigureItOut_ Jul 23, 2014
I think you did a nice job here :) It's a bit relatable :) Just try to work on your flow a bit more and adding details and description :) Overall, nice job :)