Broken Princess

Broken Princess

19.3K Reads 698 Votes 31 Part Story
Mara By Broken_Ang3l Completed

"Everyone else sucks." he grumbled. "And your not a freak. Your just broken. Your my beautiful Broken Princess."

TRIGGER WARNING: This story involves self harm, and suicide.

Brownies4U18 Brownies4U18 Nov 18, 2014
Love the way it's described to the perfection and a very interesting way to start a book
Brownies4U18 Brownies4U18 Nov 18, 2014
Such a deep poem, describes it to the perfection simply beautiful
BeyondTheTower BeyondTheTower Aug 06, 2014
Stab the guy in the dick with my pencil... just... ouch... >_<
_FigureItOut_ _FigureItOut_ Jul 23, 2014
I think you did a nice job here :) It's a bit relatable :) Just try to work on your flow a bit more and adding details and description :) Overall, nice job :)
rifleshots rifleshots Jul 20, 2014
I love the art and description, your writing isnt complicated and it isnt crappy either.
Dany1908 Dany1908 Jul 16, 2014
your way of writing is pretty easy to read i like plus nice description can't wait to read more about the characters