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Juan for Juan

Juan for Juan

7.1K Reads 501 Votes 9 Part Story
Bobby_Writing By Bobby_Writing Updated Apr 29, 2012

Juan for Juan is in essence a teen romance although I have planned it to demonstrate the effect the social conditions we have today can affect people’s lives and the way in which everyone can affect each other with lots of humour, thrills and twist along the way!

The story will follow the characters’ as they near the end of school and are faced by having to embark upon either college or work, choices will have to be made and people will always be hurt

WeBWriting WeBWriting May 20, 2012
The detail you use is so beautiful, it really tells a story of it's own. When I read this I felt like I was there with thiem, I could see it all so beautifully.
GuruPushkin GuruPushkin May 20, 2012
I loved the detail, and the story line seems very interesting. I love your writing. you don't leave anything.
soulofakitten soulofakitten May 20, 2012
Really good start. It the perfect length and catches your eye right off the bat. Really good for a Guys P.O.V too. You don't see a lot of stories written in a males perspective. Really good!
maiikay maiikay May 20, 2012
It's really nice! It's got a great prologue already, and for once something's in a guy's P.O.V.! I really enjoyed reading it.
Xrosesnevercry Xrosesnevercry Apr 24, 2012
It like the style and your description. It's a good start :) #voted
VanieeMadera VanieeMadera Apr 24, 2012
I love the little pun at the end <3 This was a very easy going flow, I love the detail and description you put into it (: Very brilliant ! Very fresh and amazing (: