Dead Weight

Dead Weight

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Samantha By sammy44680 Updated Nov 08, 2010

One hard night after coming home to her disfonctional her mother and dealing with her, who was heavily under the influance of many sorts, Abel has a vision of her untimely death. Confused and frightened, Abel doesnt know what to think, not only was she not alone, but accompanied by two others, two very handsome and mysterious guys. One whom she seems to know in her dream is a guy named Finn, but isnt the guy she has the hots for, that would be Knox. Some time later she puts it off as a crazy dream brought on by her hard life. her life hadnt always been this way just the last 5 years when her mother went uncertifiably crazy. Know one knows why. All seems its crappy normal self until one day her big brother shows up with a new friend, who happens to be the guy Finn from her Dream. When things start going crazy and turned up side down, is it because of Shane's new friend? are the guys from her dream real? will Abel die at just 16? find out in Dead Weight.

sammy44680 sammy44680 Oct 16, 2010
@Mars23  thanks so much actually the girl for both my story book covers ie; dead weight & angels and death is my sister i just jazzed them up a bit, i thought they were really cool pics so thanks alot ur awesome!
novel_girl novel_girl Jun 26, 2010
i loveee this :) it makes me want to know what's gonna happen next!
                              keep posting pleaase :) 
sammy44680 sammy44680 Jun 10, 2010
ok just finished changing the 3rd person pov in the beginning to the 1st pov. hope its much better :) check it out plz!
XxKittenxX XxKittenxX Jun 10, 2010
Love it I was totally in thrall of the story at every moment you're really good keep it up :D
AE_KIrk AE_KIrk May 29, 2010
Few spelling mistakes and some sentences may need to be changed, also you  may want to paragraph it, break it up a bit.
                              Apart from that its a good little story!
                              
                              Keep up the good work!
                              
UnidentifiedChild UnidentifiedChild May 27, 2010
A few misspelled words but thats no problem. I really do think your story is awesome. And from what I see a lot of other people think so too. Especially Finn. He's already become my favorite character. <33 I love guys that seem so.. badass. The scar kind of tells it all really. ;] Upload soon!