The Beggining of the End...

The Beggining of the End...

178 Reads 4 Votes 3 Part Story
Chris Golde By Ingotwetrust Updated Mar 13, 2011

A apocalyptic world were the Communist rule and the western governments are running scared. This story follows Jacob' Whats left of the 301st Infantry division after the siege of Mt. Olympus,  Washington. Read the action packed story of Jacob and his comrades duking it out against the Communists... This War Would go either way

AngusEcrivain AngusEcrivain Mar 14, 2011
I really like this... you're style is unusual but effective :)
AngusEcrivain AngusEcrivain Mar 14, 2011
Not a grammar error, but a spelling one... 'greed' should be 'green', I assume so anyway! 
                              
                              A pretty strong first chapter :) I like it! :D