Mystery Guy (One Direction)

Mystery Guy (One Direction)

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yrsxoxo By yrsxoxo Updated Nov 01, 2012

Denaysi Ramirez is a normal 16 year old who has 2 best friends with the hugest crush on One Direction. She's not that into them but what happens when she bumps into a mysterious guy after school one day right outside her house? Hmmm... Will her life change?

yrsxoxo yrsxoxo Jul 21, 2012
@BelWatson thank you! And yeah it was by accident cause I'm doing this whole writing thing in my notes on my iPod and it's hard to know whether one paragraph is long enough so I just put it together. Haha. Thanks for taking your time to read! (:
yrsxoxo yrsxoxo Jul 20, 2012
@lollylover77 thanks! I'm not much if a writer so I need people's opinions so thank you! (: and yes I know, you see I'm on my iPod and just typing whatever on my notes and passing them over to my works so yeah an okay will do! ^.^
IgnoredChaos IgnoredChaos Jul 19, 2012
i liked it but just a tip I think you should have more of the story-the intro was a bit boring and the chapter is really short! but overall really good! please read my book Forgotten by Life! thx