Two twin boys living next door, and they BOTH want in my pants!? FML!

Two twin boys living next door, and they BOTH want in my pants!? FML!

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VampireLover269 By VampireLover269 Completed

Jerry is a normal teen, who get's forced to move with her dad and little brother Kane too a whole other town. She thinks this is going to be a very boring summer, until she meets the twins next door, who take her on whirl wind adventure of emotions. Jerry experience heart break, happiness, and anger, in this surprising teen drama.

misheard_ misheard_ Nov 12, 2015
This could use some work, to be honest. There's a lot of little mistakes with punctuation and grammar. I'm not insulting you, just giving criticism.
lilacsheep lilacsheep Jan 30, 2015
okay.
                              the cover is annoying the shít out of me, but the book's good.
AlexaRuss AlexaRuss Oct 26, 2014
A comment on the title: after all that why would she want them to feed her lasagna (fml is feed me lasagna)
violettutk violettutk May 02, 2014
I really love to read the book but seeing it in one enormous paragraph, I cant read it its hurting my eyes. </3
Sevaramen Sevaramen Dec 04, 2013
I don't want to nag, but seriously I love this chapter it's just the thing is you really need to break down that huge paragraph.
                              
                               My eyes became tired and I just started to skim the page and I don't like that feeling cause then I don't get the story properly.
patchesgirl15 patchesgirl15 Oct 07, 2013
At the end of this book I cried cause did not want it to finish!!!!! It was that good!!!!:*{