The Guardian (Narnia fanfic)

The Guardian (Narnia fanfic)

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LionHeart721 By LionHeart721 Completed

***UNDER MAJOR EDITING***

When Willow was orphaned she was found by a great king and brought to Narnia. She became his apprentice and learned from him the skills she would need to fulfill her purpose in Narnia. When the four Pevensie children find their selves in Narnia will Willow risk everything to keep them safe?                                                                               Disclaimer: I don't own anything in this story all rights and credit go to C.S Lewis I only own Willow and my parts of the story line. Also credit to whose ever this picture is I just stumbled upon it.

ChloeWelsh7 ChloeWelsh7 Apr 06
I read it as put in place by a bitch who refered to herself as the queen of Narnia
-Unknown-User- -Unknown-User- Nov 15, 2015
You said we should point out all mistakes that we find.. I think here is the first one: Shouldn't it be "there are"?
LionHeart721 LionHeart721 Dec 11, 2014
@jujusimp-xoxo Ahaha! Nah ur fine. I wrote this story before i got my laptop so i wrote it on my phone 
jujusimp-xoxo jujusimp-xoxo Dec 10, 2014
It's into not in to (tell me to stop at any time, I'm a huge grammar nazi)
livelaughlovenarnia livelaughlovenarnia Jun 26, 2014
PLEASE I've seen 10 billion times worse. Trust me, you're fine. ;)
livelaughlovenarnia livelaughlovenarnia Jun 26, 2014
Comma after courtesy of Aslan.
                              
                              Always put commas after but. 
                              
                              Apostrophe for didn't.
                              
                              Commas before and after when I would change forms.
                              
                              This is interesting. :)