His Dark Side

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Rahnia By RahniaForever Updated 16 days ago
Evelyn Carter is a lonely, self centered girl but the loneliness doesn’t bother her, the helpless girl in her dreams does. When she befriends a gorgeous stranger her life will change forever. But despite the stranger’s charm there is something else about him that she just can’t figure out. 
    On the other hand, Eric Clarke has lots of secrets he keeps to himself. He stays quiet and hidden. No one really knows who he is, all they know is his name. He doesn’t like socializing but that will have to change when one day he finds Evelyn Carter at his door step. She is determined to find the hidden secrets of his mysterious past.
    But Eric Clarke is determined not to reveal His Dark Side.
Nice so far, great climax at the end. Your description is well written and it's nice to see someone who gets their grammar right :)
                                    I can't really see much fault in this although I would say it would be better if it was slightly longer ...but Idk it's your story haha
I think it would work better without the description of his hair tbh so just the first two sentences.
Love the new cover!!! Haven't been able to read too much of it yet because I've been far too busy for my own good, but this is def on my top read list!!!
This is interesting story. My guess are: it's about angels and demons if I'm correct x
0.o I love your attention to detail! I feel like I'm there great work!
This idea! It's so great, really good plot and great description! Well done :D