His Dark Side

His Dark Side

24.6K Reads 1.4K Votes 34 Part Story
Rahnia By RahniaForever Updated Aug 08, 2017

Evelyn Carter is a lonely and self centered girl but the loneliness doesn't bother her, the helpless girl in her nightmares does and when she befriends a mysterious stranger, her life changes forever. Despite the stranger's charm, there's something about him that she just can't figure out. 

He stays quiet and hidden. No one really knows who he is, all they know is his name. On top of it all, she's starting to suspect he might not even be human. Evelyn is determined to find the hidden secrets of his mysterious past. 
 
But Eric Clarke is determined not to reveal his dark side.

  • burn
  • dark
  • death
  • hate
  • iansomerhalder
  • kill
  • love
  • magic
  • scream
  • side
  • supernatural
  • torture
  • underworld
  • villain
ChosenbytheMoon ChosenbytheMoon Sep 08, 2017
I agree with @sscott8, with a nightmare like that I would not be "strolling". I would be taking shaky steps while trying to get my heartbeat under control.
BloodySpade000 BloodySpade000 Nov 24, 2017
Everyone except one person has long comments about eyes not searching frantically and I agree with them but I guess good start
Sim-AntinI Sim-AntinI Sep 22, 2017
Well,  even in the gloomiest of weather, I do feel safe inside my home. the sentence gives the feeling the house is an impersonal place where she feels unsafe. was that what you were aiming for?
NinaMarks NinaMarks Sep 11, 2017
This is a perfect way to tie up a chapter. I love it. I'm already intrigued and excited to read more.
EllenFairyBlue4 EllenFairyBlue4 Sep 10, 2017
Interesting prologue. I'm curious to know more about this mysterious black haired stranger. I just hope her dream isn't going to become real in the future.
jasfari_ jasfari_ Sep 13, 2017
This certainly leaves me intrigued to read more O_o!! Amazing!