Love in the Stars | James Kirk [1]

Love in the Stars | James Kirk [1]

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e. denise By CrazyDreamGirl Completed

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" I've always loved the Stars, but I'm starting to think that others don't. "


Star Trek Universe | Completed: July 21, 2014 | © e. denise | Cover made by me

  • aliens
  • enterprise
  • kirk
  • sciencefiction
  • spock
  • stars
Good start, your first paragraph was a little rough, it was a bit too much tell and not enough show or explain. Other than that it was fairly well written for a prologue, and has me interested in reading more.
Araceli1414 Araceli1414 Sep 15, 2016
Captain Pike is THE best father figure. I keep saying this, I know.