Love in the Stars | James Kirk [1]

Love in the Stars | James Kirk [1]

59.3K Reads 543 Votes 5 Part Story
CrazyDreamGirl By CrazyDreamGirl Updated Jan 10

Editing 


"Oh, good for you, princess."

"You should shut up before I hurt you."


Star Trek Universe | Completed: July 21, 2014 | © e. denise | Cover made by me

  • aliens
  • enterprise
  • kirk
  • sciencefiction
  • spock
  • stars
VivioletteStorm VivioletteStorm Aug 04, 2017
Good start, your first paragraph was a little rough, it was a bit too much tell and not enough show or explain. Other than that it was fairly well written for a prologue, and has me interested in reading more.
Araceli1414 Araceli1414 Sep 15, 2016
Captain Pike is THE best father figure. I keep saying this, I know.