He loved/killed me

He loved/killed me

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Yusra By WhenIReadSoftly Completed

Everyone love's summer.  Imagine spending it with a vampire.  Kristal meets a sexy neighbor who apparently is hiding a deadly secret.  She's warned to stay away because he is trouble.  But who can resist a total hot guy?  She falls for him eventually and he goes for her.  But when she ends up with a secret that might kill both Nathan and her, should she tell, or not tell?

DazedAndConfused DazedAndConfused Mar 14, 2011
paaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttttyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D 
                              
                              thanks so much for the dediatcion! really good start so far - keep writing! <3
DazedAndConfused DazedAndConfused Mar 14, 2011
nice start - i was a tiny bit confused as to why Jack pulled away from her - great start though - it defo caught my attention and i like your writing style too! onto the next part.... :D