In Love With A Criminal

In Love With A Criminal

1 Part Story 199 Reads 13 Votes
Scruffy Gurl By ScruffyGurll Updated Jul 17, 2012

These are words written in a way that shows that am trying to express myself to the reader... I really hope you like it.. Pls read nd comment nd pls vote *grinz*

ScruffyGurll ScruffyGurll Oct 03, 2012 12:12AM
@yvonne96 thanks soo much... Buh i didnt get ur correction.. M confused nd would appreciate your help..
yvonne96 yvonne96 Oct 01, 2012 08:01AM
Loved the emotions flowing the poem..  2nd line 'and' is not complete. <3it :D
ScruffyGurll ScruffyGurll Oct 01, 2012 06:18AM
@RedRascalStrawberry.. Aiit fenkzz xo much dear... @looneygleek You changed your username or wah??
The anguish and pain could be felt but you could add more to it...maybe there is the need of using the right word.....some words say a lot. In all, it was nice:)
amaZAYN1dluver amaZAYN1dluver Sep 04, 2012 11:04PM
That's really sad. I knew a girl with an abusive bf.
                                    
                                    It's 100% true?
I agree that not many people voice their pain. Anyway, there was a couple mistakes but all-in-all it was a good poem. By the way, I like the poems cover.