These are words written in a way that shows that am trying to express myself to the reader... I really hope you like it.. Pls read nd comment nd pls vote *grinz*
@yvonne96 thanks soo much... Buh i didnt get ur correction.. M confused nd would appreciate your help..
Loved the emotions flowing the poem.. 2nd line 'and' is not complete. <3it :D
@RedRascalStrawberry.. Aiit fenkzz xo much dear... @looneygleek You changed your username or wah??
The anguish and pain could be felt but you could add more to it...maybe there is the need of using the right word.....some words say a lot. In all, it was nice:)
That's really sad. I knew a girl with an abusive bf.
It's 100% true?
I agree that not many people voice their pain. Anyway, there was a couple mistakes but all-in-all it was a good poem. By the way, I like the poems cover.