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When life begins at 21

When life begins at 21

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erica_drury By erica_drury Updated Sep 09, 2011

The dark was all she knew, it was her reality. Her only link to the outside world was a night mare which replayed in her head. 
Discover what happens when she see's light for the first time and discovers the life she leads is a lie. And her night mare is her truth.
Follow Talia's journey as she leads you down her path of discovery, pain, heartache and love.

Racquet Racquet Jul 03, 2011
@erica_drury Thank you! Since your older don't know how much you'll enjoy a teen romance, but you can give it a shot. I'm sure I'll still enjoy reading them. I'm twenty, so I feel like I'm getting to be wattapad old myself... Congrats about the "one on the way" bet that has to be exciting :) 
                              - Raq
Racquet Racquet Jul 03, 2011
@erica_drury AWW!!!! You have kids? This is good so far. Sad but good. One cannot comment much on it because it's rather short. But from my vantage point, the grammar is good and the story flow is excellent. Onward!
                              - Raq
erica_drury erica_drury Jul 03, 2011
@MiyukiMomoko hi thank u sorry i havent read urs yet im just waiting for my kids to go to bed theyre being little monkeys
TaLyXO123 TaLyXO123 Jul 03, 2011
Yay! Thanks for suggesting this, I like how it's darker than the normal expected fantasy story that most people think of! Wow what's up with her father? Next page! :D
scattering-memories scattering-memories Jul 02, 2011
Beautiful intro! I loved the simplicity of it.
                              Your descriptions are really vivid, and you have a very unique style! The way you write it kept me in suspense, I wondered why her father did that?
                              You did a great job in writing in a little girl's POV. :D
                              Thumbs up!
erica_drury erica_drury Jul 01, 2011
@wherethegemslie @aBitParanoid hi thanks to both of u for reading and enjoying feel free to read on! :-D its getting late her so i appologise if i dont get to ur stories tonight. i will tomorrow though!