Penance ❖Editing❖

Penance ❖Editing❖

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Aria By Missing_Puzzle_Piece Updated Oct 03

In the near future, the human race has been forced to quarantine an entire country after the Known Virus, also known as the K-Virus, spread throughout their lands, killing millions and mutating thousands.   
  
  The Alliance, the supreme government of the world, have imprisoned them all in specially designed jail cells, more than 200 million innocent citizens. Every time the virus emerges from within a person, soldiers haul them away, never to be seen again.   
  
  Now, Audra, herself a victim of the K-Virus outbreak, has begun to show symptoms. The soldiers come, and Audra finds herself in a new world, and realizes what really happens beyond the cell doors...
  
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  I want to give all credit to @RebellionOfALifetime for the cover! Tell her what amazing work she did!
  
  And please vote if you like it, and comment! Don't be afraid to critique!

Nice intro. There are a lot of references! I'm curious to find out what they mean in the continuing chapter.
mercurous mercurous Aug 11
this book is amazing; but am i the only one who thinks the cover looks nearly exactly like one by @lotteholder?
It's great to be in the presence of an awakened soul. It shows through your writing :) Namaste 🙏🏾
Chatachino Chatachino Oct 02
How can you surrender yourself to the virus? That'd been you could come immune consider you could do the opposite of surrender yourself....
_tanyasas_ _tanyasas_ Jun 23
Great beginning, I am routing for you #Wattys2016, my book is coming along too go check it out!! 😘
gabby4623 gabby4623 Dec 10, 2015
love it, it's amazing how you packed so many descriptions in such a short chapter. I t definitely makes me want to read on and adds a mysterious tone to the story. I can't wait to start reading!