Falling In Love at a Coffee Shop

1 Part Story 677 Reads 22 Votes
Nik By Nikosaur Completed
We all dream of finding the one person who loves the same things we do. What will Christian do when he finds a girl with the same interests?
I really like it since this is based on true experience. Not a lot of people show their real colors to a stranger.
It is good;written well. There is only one thing puzzling to me:is it supposed to be a poem or a story in poetic stanzas?
Unique and sweet makes us think of all the times we could meet someone special very nice
I haven't read any like this before.....I loved it! its original,creative and I enjoyed it thoroughly:) nicely done
Lol... thats so cool that its a true story!! KInda like them better then fiction sometimes! This was good i like the vocab and adjictives u used..
I love the story that this tells! I do think that you should seperate your stanzans a bit more, but that's really just a technical thing. The concept was pretty unique, and I wasn't expecting the ending, which is always nice. :D