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The Girl who cried Death (Will Not Continue)

The Girl who cried Death (Will Not Continue)

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donttouchmyramen By donttouchmyramen Updated Sep 03, 2011

I am so sorry for my former self's writing. If you would like to keep your sanity in literature, I recommend you don't read this because 13 year old me was very silly. You have been warned. Thank you for your cooperation.

I'm just gonna keep it as a memento. Again, I'm sorry.

RoseKnight RoseKnight Aug 28, 2011
I was interested from the summary so i came to check it out. And guess what? I wanna read more! I really like it!!!!!!
momamoose momamoose Jul 13, 2011
God, Aden is such a perv xD  but I still like him ;)  he's funny xD
                              Nice chapter, good descriptions, too, it could use a little more descriptions, but that's just my taste, you don't have to change it for me, it's your story after all ^^
momamoose momamoose Jul 13, 2011
@Xpineapple-blenderX no problem, just concentrate on finishing the story for now, there's plenty of time to edit later ^^
donttouchmyramen donttouchmyramen Jul 13, 2011
                              Thanks :) Haha yes it does need editing and I really appreciate you pointing it out becuse it is true XD lolz 
momamoose momamoose Jul 13, 2011
a good hook :)  could use a bit of editing, but other than that, I don't have anything else bad to say about it
                              the title and cover sure caught my attention (i like the umbrella girl on the cover ^^) and I look forward to reading more because I'm still not quite sure how this is going to turn out ^^
bestlibrary bestlibrary Apr 17, 2011
really is a very wonderful addition to the vampire books
                              i think title is a big part of attracting readers, but you got that part covered