The Reason Why

The Reason Why

350 Reads 9 Votes 1 Part Story
Madeline By MyMidnightDream Updated Mar 12, 2011

When Gabriella was in fifth grade she moved from Indianapolis to Ohio, leaving her two best friends behind, Amanda and Matthew.  She tried to stay in communication with both of her friends, but life got busy for all of them and the effort to talk to each other creased.  Five years later, Gabriella moved back to Indianapolis due to her dad's job.  When Gabby returns, she befriends a preschool classmate who belongs to her pool and a first grade classmate who has youth group with her, but will Amanda, Matthew, and Gabriella resume their friendship?  What happens when Gabriella realizes she has a crush on one of her best friends?  Only time will tell Gabriella the reason why.

JarOfHearts96 JarOfHearts96 Apr 17, 2011
@MyMidnightDream Go for it. I can't judge much from this, but everything is worth continuing. 
MyMidnightDream MyMidnightDream Apr 16, 2011
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                              I need your opinion, should I continue writing The Reason Why?  I need you honest opinion, I promise I won't be offended.  :)
MyMidnightDream MyMidnightDream Apr 02, 2011
@Andrea97 Thank you!!  I'm glad you liked the first paragraph!!:)  I will be sure to message you the next time I upload...
JarOfHearts96 JarOfHearts96 Apr 02, 2011
The first paragraph really hooked me in. Well done. 
                              There are a few errors here and there, but that can be fixed with editing.
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frenchielovesyou frenchielovesyou Apr 02, 2011
WOW!!  YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED!!!  I CAN"T WAIT TO READ MORE FROM YOU!!  
lovevolleyball lovevolleyball Apr 02, 2011
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!  DON'T STOP WRITING!!!!  I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!