Shooting for the Stars

Shooting for the Stars

125 Reads 49 Votes 8 Part Story
Writing-with-Random By Writing-with-Random Updated 6 days ago

Fredrick has been infected with an alien parasite his whole life. He is nothing but a freak science experiment. Then, he bumps into a girl named Chrissy. Together they try to fight their world and escape to space. But how can you shoot for the stars if the anchor of the past is weighing you down?

  • advanced
  • aliens
  • betrayal
  • crazy
  • different
  • dystopian
  • escape
  • experiment
  • experiments
  • future
  • inhuman
  • invention
  • love
  • natural
  • new
  • old
  • organization
  • powers
  • project
  • random
  • romance
  • secrets
  • space
  • technology
athenathewise07 athenathewise07 Dec 07, 2018
Beautiful! Just beautiful, Random!!!! Don't chuck to many at me!!!
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 08, 2018
First part of this paragraph is great. In just a couple sentences we learn something about the character and we're introduced to the New.
athenathewise07 athenathewise07 Nov 30, 2018
Is it present or past??? I'm saying the way you said, 'lays as few yards ahead of me...
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 08, 2018
Use simple language for simple things.    Just frown and glare. No need to etch a frown or glare jealously.