What is your request master?

What is your request master?

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Nikki By Immortal-Angel Completed

My name is Alle, I am a slave.
The princes slave to be correct, I wondered how long I would last!
Because the kingdom is cruel and they are all dead!

  • slave
  • vampires
I don’t know, Raphael sounds majestic but then you have his brother named Kyle, and I imagine a 15-year-old skater kid
readingread10000 readingread10000 Dec 24, 2015
The chapters so far are really short u should try to make them longer
TrishBanks TrishBanks Jan 25, 2012
I think it's a great start and the length is fine. I've seen shorter, it's up to the author to describe which information she wants to share and when. I think you've done a great job.
Utau-sama Utau-sama May 24, 2011
@DaddysGirl1129 zzz keep this a secret, but im younger than u... zzz im 9... dun tell the wattpad person! cuz people as young as us should not be in wattpad.
The_Lone_Tiger The_Lone_Tiger May 15, 2011
@Utau-sama wow how old r u im 11 and y no im not offended at all
Utau-sama Utau-sama Mar 12, 2011
short as usual, but try not to use words like 'f**k'. for children like me, we hate this words. so try not to put in offensive or disgusting words. thanks. it is direct, but as usual, the plot is good. good job!!